Dorian Gray in carriage

I can't draw well( But I want to draw))
I read book The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Fingal O’Flahertie Wills Wilde last week and want to show you how I imagine characters)
I watched film 2009, Ben Barns is great, but I didn't like this film because of change in story.
It's Dorian in carriage when he knew, that Sybil's brother is dead.